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Curse of the Werespider

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I wasn't really happy with the other version, so I updated it.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I think that this is a great improvement from the previous version. The lighting is balanced, as are the the use of colors.

Something I noticed is that the abdomen looks like it is detached from her body. Perhaps it is the angle, or that her back isn't visible, but I would suggest improving upon this. As it stands, it looks like she's about to be eaten by a spider-monster, rather than transforming into a werespider .

Finally, I love your attention to the details, for instance, her black nails, and the muscle lines on the lines on her chest. It all adds to the feel and vibe of the drawing.

Keep up the great work.